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June 12th, 2008, 2:55 pm

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Oranges_and_Pears, July 22nd, 2008, 2:57 pm


I honestly had no idea what clothes April wears...so I put her in a sort of hiking outfit, if that's okay.

The whole overlapping bubble thing was kinda hard because of the way I make my bubbles...I hope you can tell that Gold is the one really talking in panel 4. April is just saying "I kudhskuef sudhvkefd"

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Fan_Of_Everything, July 22nd, 2008, 3:21 pm

I forgot to mention...
This page was supposed to go before the last two pages. But I love it anyway! *hugs* This scene was originally done in a hospital, but I thought that was a bit drastic. You'll find out by the end of the chapter anyway! I love the first and last panel! The bubble thing is okay, in my overlapping bubbles, there's nothing under there. By the way, it kind of looks in the second panel like April's a kid, but Kipper and April are the same age.

Fan_Of_Everything, July 22nd, 2008, 3:37 pm

Edit
I switched it so now it's moved as chapter 3, page one.

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Oranges_and_Pears, July 22nd, 2008, 4:04 pm


Oh, okay. I was like, "where did it go?!"

Yeah, April is supposed to look older like Kipper, but perspective in panel 2 kinda destroyed that. April is kinda looking down at Kipper. I was hoping her outfit would maybe make her look a little more mature.

Fan_Of_Everything, July 22nd, 2008, 4:14 pm

Alright
Their ages aren't really clear. I didn't even realize until recently that Emerald should be older then Kipper. Also, for all the fans, the chapter cover should pretty much give away the real reason. I soo want to introduce Aurora soon!

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